Piiike
03-29-2004, 02:46 AM
For example, I see characters introduce two ways.
INTRO #1
INT. FITNESS CENTER - DAY
A YOUNG MAN in his late 20s, is lifting weights.
(His name is Bobby, but it isn't mentioned until another character says "Hi Bobby.")
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OR
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INTRO #2
INT. FITNESS CENTER - DAY
BOBBY, a young man in his late 20s, lifts weights etc....
How do you experienced writers handle minor things such as this?
INTRO #1
INT. FITNESS CENTER - DAY
A YOUNG MAN in his late 20s, is lifting weights.
(His name is Bobby, but it isn't mentioned until another character says "Hi Bobby.")
-
OR
-
INTRO #2
INT. FITNESS CENTER - DAY
BOBBY, a young man in his late 20s, lifts weights etc....
How do you experienced writers handle minor things such as this?