whitingmedia
03-19-2004, 06:32 AM
I am just starting a story where my 3 main characters are a husband, his wife and her mother.
The story is about a guy upsetting his Mother-in-law who get revenge.
When I first introduce the characters in the story, what is the best way to clearly explain their relationship?
I have tried it many different ways and nothing seems right.
especially the husband. If I introduce him as the Son-in-law of XXXXX (mother-in-law) it seems to reduce the role of his wife who is still a primary character. If I introduce him as the husband of YYYYYY (wife) it seems to reduce the Mothers role.
Maybe I am making too much of this? Confused.
The story is about a guy upsetting his Mother-in-law who get revenge.
When I first introduce the characters in the story, what is the best way to clearly explain their relationship?
I have tried it many different ways and nothing seems right.
especially the husband. If I introduce him as the Son-in-law of XXXXX (mother-in-law) it seems to reduce the role of his wife who is still a primary character. If I introduce him as the husband of YYYYYY (wife) it seems to reduce the Mothers role.
Maybe I am making too much of this? Confused.