payperfilm
04-12-2009, 06:44 PM
I have a thriller that's under 95 pages and an easy read. I know it has problems but I can't quite put my finger on what is wrong. I'm looking to get feedback on it and willing to do the same for another writer.
I'm not big into science fiction or period pieces with lots of description. So I probably wouldn't be a lot of help in those genres.
I've written a dozen screenplays and produced a couple. I was a winner in the ScriptSavvy contest last month.
http://www.cvdistributes.com/cgi/shopper.cgi?preadd=action&key=CM0101
If you're interested in swapping scripts, please email me. I reside in Southern California.
payperfilm@yahoo.com
Thanks,
Phil
I'm not big into science fiction or period pieces with lots of description. So I probably wouldn't be a lot of help in those genres.
I've written a dozen screenplays and produced a couple. I was a winner in the ScriptSavvy contest last month.
http://www.cvdistributes.com/cgi/shopper.cgi?preadd=action&key=CM0101
If you're interested in swapping scripts, please email me. I reside in Southern California.
payperfilm@yahoo.com
Thanks,
Phil