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12-07-2005, 09:12 AM
I thought this would be interesting. Participate if you will.

I need you to write a three sentence paragraph on love in the present tense. But you may not use the words love or sex and each word cannot be more than two syllables. In addition, no adverbs may be used.

Good luck.

Hairy Lime
12-07-2005, 09:46 AM
She holds his heart. He holds hers. Trust keeps it alive.

12-07-2005, 09:47 AM
I want, for I’ve not had. I need, for I've known. I have and am filled, where one must be.


**** me! **** you! Look at us, we’re ****ing!

12-07-2005, 11:05 AM
The real thing? It’s not Friday night fever and screwing all night long. It’s popping back zits during the week nights, and not getting mad when you wake up in a pool of cold saliva that isn’t yours.

That's more of a dialogue quote than an action line, but you didn't specify that.

12-07-2005, 11:50 AM
Who's. Your. Daddy?

12-07-2005, 12:38 PM
If they say that the eyes are the key to the soul, then I say that your soul is the key to my heart. You are my one, my all, my dear. You are me.


12-07-2005, 01:00 PM

**** me! **** you! Look at us, we’re ****ing!

Maybe I should have worded the title of this thread a little differently.

12-07-2005, 01:17 PM
"You wanna do what?"

"Please, honey; I just have to."

"Oh, okay."

12-07-2005, 03:03 PM
I am the wolf at your door and I wait in the night, beyond the golden light that floods from your window. I have left the pack for you, longing for you to let me in. I am the thing that no one wants.

12-07-2005, 03:23 PM
when i find it you will know. when i find it i will know. if found we will both know.


J off course
12-07-2005, 04:10 PM
Cold floor and dirty socks.
She walks on tiptoes.
Eggs done his way aren't ready.