For those that do not know me, I am Cyfress. Been a lifer here and been interested in the mystery that is screenwriting for 21 years. I'm very well read on the craft and very well read in amateur scripts. I do not offer coverage. I will not take your script and just check mark what you do well and what needs work, I won't summarize your plot for you and ask you to think about how you can make it better.
I will look at your script as a work in progress and it is my job to get into the trenches with you and point out to you where the story is under developed, what it lacks as to per its genre, suggestions on what fills those holes and how to implement. I will try and follow your through line through the narrative with a fine tooth comb and tell you where it breaks, goes off track, or sometimes a through line is absent altogether. You will come away with a new set of eyes for the script. No longer stuck. No longer not knowing what to do with the script or what it needs.
Please email me with any questions at [email protected]. For anyone that wants a taste of what they are getting before they pay, I'll read 25% of your submitted piece for free and write you up the kind of notes I'm capable of so you can decide if you want to continue or not.
I do not have an MFA in screenwriting, I never worked in the movie business, and I have never sold a script, but I will put my notes up against any screenwriting consultant out there. I have a knack for structure, you'll see that from my notes. My notes are not vague or general. They are very specific to your story.
I am charging $149.99 for a feature, 79.99 for 1 hour pilot, and $40 for 30 minute TV spec. You will find that I don't just give you my notes and say bye-bye. I'm there on email for questions, suggestions, and a lot of times I even offer to read the new outline before you start writing. This is the perfect time of year of you are planning to get that NICHOL SCRIPT in shape. I'm dam sure I can get you to the quarters or semis for sure which will get you requests from agents, managers, and producers.
If you are looking to raise your material to the next level, I can help you do that. PM me for the details of how to send your script and handle payment.
Thanks and I look forward to working with you.
I will look at your script as a work in progress and it is my job to get into the trenches with you and point out to you where the story is under developed, what it lacks as to per its genre, suggestions on what fills those holes and how to implement. I will try and follow your through line through the narrative with a fine tooth comb and tell you where it breaks, goes off track, or sometimes a through line is absent altogether. You will come away with a new set of eyes for the script. No longer stuck. No longer not knowing what to do with the script or what it needs.
Please email me with any questions at [email protected]. For anyone that wants a taste of what they are getting before they pay, I'll read 25% of your submitted piece for free and write you up the kind of notes I'm capable of so you can decide if you want to continue or not.
I do not have an MFA in screenwriting, I never worked in the movie business, and I have never sold a script, but I will put my notes up against any screenwriting consultant out there. I have a knack for structure, you'll see that from my notes. My notes are not vague or general. They are very specific to your story.
I am charging $149.99 for a feature, 79.99 for 1 hour pilot, and $40 for 30 minute TV spec. You will find that I don't just give you my notes and say bye-bye. I'm there on email for questions, suggestions, and a lot of times I even offer to read the new outline before you start writing. This is the perfect time of year of you are planning to get that NICHOL SCRIPT in shape. I'm dam sure I can get you to the quarters or semis for sure which will get you requests from agents, managers, and producers.
If you are looking to raise your material to the next level, I can help you do that. PM me for the details of how to send your script and handle payment.
Thanks and I look forward to working with you.
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