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Forum: Announcements, News, & Opportunities 11-20-2013, 10:38 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,014
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: RIP Syd Field

I have Syd Field's Screenwriting Workshop DVD "How to Write a Screenplay That Sells to Hollywood" sitting on my bookshelf. I haven't watched it in years, but I may just pop it in and watch it now. In...
Forum: Basics 11-20-2013, 10:01 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,845
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Person's name changes

I have a character with two identities. I never change her original identity though. The second identity is very subtle and she uses it to hide certain aspects of her life from key individuals. I've...
Forum: Basics 03-23-2012, 08:01 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,152
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Having doubts. Need help!

Thank you all for your very helpful advice.


I was thinking about possibly opening on BLACK where we will hear the sniffing and snorting and then FADE IN to a pile of cocaine. An EXHALE followed...
Forum: Basics 03-14-2012, 07:29 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,152
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Having doubts? Need help!

As the cocaine rises, shapes, and builds the Miami skyline, it won't be white powder, I want it to look like the skyline is actually being built right before our eyes, but instead of bricks or steel,...
Forum: Basics 03-14-2012, 07:01 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,152
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Having doubts? Need help!

Noted. :) Thank you.
Forum: Basics 03-14-2012, 04:29 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,152
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Having doubts? Need help!

Yes, it is the opening image. I want to establish that the Miami skyline was built from cocaine. As a Floridian, we all grew up knowing that the money from cocaine built that skyline. I just felt...
Forum: Basics 03-14-2012, 12:12 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,152
Posted By LolaMoon
Having doubts. Need help!

I am having some doubts about a scene that I am writing? It's an opening image/sequence and what I am trying to portray is the MIAMI SKYLINE being built from the ground up, not from bricks or steel,...
Forum: Research and Resources 12-07-2011, 04:28 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 4,576
Posted By LolaMoon
Forum: Research and Resources 01-17-2011, 02:37 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,328
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Police department mental health specialist?

Police are able to make a decision on whether to take someone who is acting strangely and may be a threat to themselves or to others to the hospital and hold them for a certain amount of time (Baker...
Forum: Research and Resources 01-17-2011, 02:15 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,217
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Poisons!

You can always use a "ten-cent pistol." It's drugs (usually heroin) laced with a lethal amount of poison.
Forum: Basics 12-12-2010, 10:21 AM
Replies: 40
Views: 3,737
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Words You Hate to Type

Definitely.

It's not that I can't spell it correctly, but for some reason, my mind has programmed itself to automatically type "definately?" :confused:
Forum: Sites, Services, Software, & Supplies 12-11-2010, 02:11 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 6,377
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: The reason I dislike screenwriting forums... hear me out...

I haven't read through this thread entirely, but as a "newbie" to this forum, I must say that I have found all the opinions to be valuable. Even as different as they can be, it's easy to find a...
Forum: Research and Resources 12-09-2010, 07:02 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 4,458
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Murder Case Files

There is an ongoing debate about Florida's "Sunshine" Laws. Some think they should be ammended, others wish their own State had such liberal Public Record Laws. Which is what it all boils down to....
Forum: Research and Resources 11-16-2010, 10:18 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 4,458
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Murder Case Files

I follow the Caylee Anthony case in Florida and you can find a lot of documents about this case (still ongoing) on line due to the Sunshine Laws. Everything from the autopsy report, to LE interviews,...
Forum: Research and Resources 11-06-2010, 11:10 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,711
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Legal question re Expert Witness

My answers in blue... I'm pretty sure that is what would happen. Again, they would not just let a murderer loose just because he claimed to be sane... and they wouldn't let a murderer loose if...
Forum: Research and Resources 11-04-2010, 11:36 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,711
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Legal question re Expert Witness

If your psychiatrist interviews the defendant, I would think that he/she would be part of the defense if he/she has constant contact with the defendant. If the psychiatrist works for the State, I...
Forum: Basics 11-04-2010, 02:03 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,226
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Aging

I used the "search" feature to make sure I wasn't asking a question that had already been covered. I know it must be hard to have to answer the same question over and over again. It's good to know...
Forum: Basics 11-03-2010, 05:00 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,226
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Aging

Thank-you!
Forum: Basics 11-03-2010, 11:33 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,226
Posted By LolaMoon
Aging

I have a character who is introduced at twenty-one-years-old and a couple (two) scenes go back to when she is six-years-old (when her mother was murdered). The first time is at her mothers' funeral...
Forum: Basics 10-16-2010, 07:32 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,370
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: Using actor/celebrity name

I have a question that falls under this subject.

I have a Fantasy Football draft scene that is really important to the story. I can't make up random names and expect people (audience/reader) to...
Forum: Research and Resources 10-15-2010, 01:38 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,085
Posted By LolaMoon
Re: 911: Police Research Help Needed

I don't know if this will help you at all, but...

I don't know about NYPD, but I do know that businesses can personally hire uniformed police officers here in Florida. I know a lot of 24 hour...
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