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Forum: Screenwriting Yesterday, 11:24 AM
Replies: 47
Views: 748
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Midpoint

Alright, Bono, you want a controversial opinion on midpoints? I've been thinking about them, and I think they're bullshit.

When I look at the examples given here or in books like Save the Cat,...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-03-2020, 03:50 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 748
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Midpoint

This is just designed to get me to read another spec script, right?
Forum: Screenwriting 06-01-2020, 08:56 AM
Replies: 47
Views: 748
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Midpoint

Sorry, I was more reacting to where the conversation had gone, rather than your original question.

Yeah, I might think about at a midpoint when I'm thinking about a movie... I do tend to think of...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-31-2020, 09:27 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 748
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Midpoint

I think that after a certain point - and that point comes quickly - there's little use in studying screenwriting. Read a few books, take a few classes... and then watch movies and write movies. ...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-28-2020, 12:52 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 1,048
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: First 10 (or 1) page

Sorry, missed this:



God no.
Forum: Screenwriting 05-28-2020, 12:27 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 1,048
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: First 10 (or 1) page

If I have a stack of scripts from people I don't know that I'm reading for staffing, I might not give up after page one... but I won't make it to page 10 if it isn't great. I'd guess I go two or...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-27-2020, 01:19 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 1,048
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: First 10 (or 1) page

Neither. I'm saying that an industry pro has a pretty good idea if a writer has an interesting voice after the first page. But even a script with a great voice better be a compelling read -...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-26-2020, 07:22 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 1,048
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: First 10 (or 1) page

The Dunning-Kruger effect (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dunning–Kruger_effect).

My advice used to be that if an amateur writer isn't getting some kind of real external validation (wins/finalists in...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-26-2020, 01:53 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 6,027
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Three Act Structure (Part 2)

Was it me?! Did I just lose a payday because of Bono?!
Forum: Screenwriting 05-26-2020, 01:40 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 1,048
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: First 10 (or 1) page

Agree with sc111.

I think you have to show voice on page one, and an interesting story by page 10.
Forum: Business Questions and Advice 05-20-2020, 01:34 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 452
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Selling spec vs. selling pitch

If you can afford to, I'd say write it - if it doesn't sell, you still own it. I've had plenty of scripts come back to life. I've had many sold pitches die out of my control.
Forum: Writing TV 05-08-2020, 11:42 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 355
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Single Cam vs Multi Cam sitcoms

I'm with Will - just copy any example of a recent show. There's enough variation show to show that no one is going to penalize you.
Forum: Screenwriting 05-02-2020, 05:29 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 6,027
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Three Act Structure (Part 2)

I agree that any screenwriting class that doesn't work on scene craft is a bad one, and there's nothing wrong with exercises. I guess the question is how long do you follow his method? One course...
Forum: Business Questions and Advice 04-15-2020, 08:06 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,191
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Thought on scripts being stolen and used?

I think there are two things to keep in mind:

1. You can't work if no one reads your writing. So you need to get it out to everyone who could possibly help, not guard it.

2. The key to being...
Forum: Writing TV 03-26-2020, 12:33 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 619
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Amount of characters for Sitcom - Minimum / Maximum?

You're way overthinking this. There's no right answer or formula to this. When you have a great concept, use the number of characters you need to tell the story. The number of important characters...
Forum: Writing TV 03-25-2020, 07:53 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 619
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Amount of characters for Sitcom - Minimum / Maximum?

Not so sure about that. (https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/4/46/The_Brady_Bunch.jpg)
Forum: Writing TV 03-25-2020, 09:46 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 619
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Amount of characters for Sitcom - Minimum / Maximum?

I think 2 is the minimum ("Odd Couple" obvious example) and there's almost no upper limit... "Soap" probably had twelve or fourteen regular actors?

(Actually, I bet you could have a sitcom with one...
Forum: Screenwriting 03-21-2020, 05:06 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 6,027
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Three Act Structure (Part 2)

Heh. Forced hiatus is no joke!
Forum: Screenwriting 03-21-2020, 01:10 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 6,027
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Three Act Structure (Part 2)

FWIW, if you write one feature in a month, you're still writing 30-40 scenes, and you're practicing all the other skills necessary to improve as a writer. I don't think the "larger story" is where...
Forum: Writing Exercises 03-21-2020, 12:51 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,116
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Scene Practice

NASCAR indeed.
Forum: Announcements, News, & Opportunities 02-22-2020, 11:41 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 437
Posted By JeffLowell
Forum: Business Questions and Advice 11-20-2019, 07:05 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 1,749
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: New York Is Better Than LA

Netflix is building a huge studio right now. My Netflix show shoots in NY, as do others. There's a 30% rebate on the under the line budget... It's not impossible to shoot here, luckily. This will...
Forum: Writing TV 09-17-2019, 03:25 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,771
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Pilot Development

I'm finding people with pilots, just like everyone else. I just used to like the spec world better. I'm adapting. ;) The trouble is sometimes you hire someone who wrote a great pilot about their...
Forum: Writing TV 09-17-2019, 01:38 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,771
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Pilot Development

No, I used to love specs of other shows. But they're just not realistic with how fragmented the tv landscape has become. If it were a spec of a show I loved, I would be excited to read it - but...
Forum: Writing TV 09-17-2019, 09:43 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,771
Posted By JeffLowell
Re: Pilot Development

I may be repeating some of what other people said, but:

Specs are dead dead dead as samples. The reason is, there are just too many shows. Everyone used to be familiar with Friends or Seinfeld... ...
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