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Forum: Research and Resources 05-31-2020, 01:44 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 66
Posted By Jab2019
More of a filming question

Hi Guys,

I know this is a writing forum but I thought there was more than likely someone on here who could answer my question for me.

Simply put, which month is generally the best to film outdoors...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-02-2020, 01:17 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 213
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Writing an action sequence to fit time

Thanks Guys,

I appreciate all your comments and assistance in this. I won’t worry about the time when it comes to writing these bits. I will write the important actions and any info needed.

Many...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-01-2020, 11:32 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 213
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Writing an action sequence to fit time

It was Extraction with Chris Hemsworth.
Forum: Screenwriting 04-30-2020, 03:41 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 213
Posted By Jab2019
Writing an action sequence to fit time

Hi Guys,

I was wondering if anyone could help with this one. I am aware that for the contests then scripts need to be about 110 pages long representing generally 1 minute per page.

However, how...
Forum: Basics 11-18-2019, 06:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,449
Posted By Jab2019
Character name in disguise

Hi Guys,

I wondered if someone could help. I am writing a scene where a character is giving a presentation to a group of would be investors. However, the character giving the presentation is a...
Forum: Basics 10-18-2019, 03:34 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,941
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene within a scene

Thank you for the response and help. I thought I had sent a thank you but apparently I had not.

Thanks
Forum: Basics 10-17-2019, 05:45 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,941
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene within a scene

The going in and the coming out have reason and are interesting. I don’t feel it necessary to show what happens in there as we all know.
Much like when you see a shot of someone walking into a casino...
Forum: Basics 10-15-2019, 12:47 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,941
Posted By Jab2019
Scene within a scene

Hi Guys,

I was wondering if you could help.

I am writing a scene where a couple are at a fair. They start off on a Helter Skelter and then go on other attractions with different reactions. It is...
Forum: Screenwriting 07-21-2019, 03:40 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Hi Guys,

Thanks for the helpful input and au certainly am glad to hear about the way an American Veteran would handle the flag in the manner required. This I didn’t know.

Regarding the comments...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 05:48 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Can I ask, without sounding judgmental, who is a screenwriter who is commercially successful? This, out of everyone who responds.

Not to question what anyone does but I am trying to find the answer...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 03:22 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Once again I thank you all. I did find that by eradicating all -ing words the descriptions became stilted and dull. I will try to keep them to a minimal but not remove them simply to remove...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 12:18 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

One other question regarding this. I have read that it is best to try and avoid -ing words which means not to use 'carrying', 'moving', wrapping' and 'closing'. Am I taking the words I have read a...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 11:58 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Thanks for your help guys. It was all helpful information. I definitely agree about it looking too much like a list and over using the word ‘box’. I was trying to make it very clear why was happening...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 10:38 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Thanks. I will adjust my slug lines to make more sense in that way. I am not sure what the highlight is with DrawER? I am English but am trying to write an American-English script. So, do you guys...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 08:59 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Hi,

I managed to do it above. Thanks for the technical help. It is certainly not my forte but was easy with Writerduet.

Thanks

J
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 08:58 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

INT.HOUSE-DAY

Ashlynn walks into the study with a large box. The study is
near empty but for a few remaining items.

She opens a draw and gently removes some military medals. She
carefully puts them...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 05:44 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Also it isn't broken up line by line as it appears above. I'm guessing that is just forum formatting.

Thanks
Forum: Screenwriting 06-24-2019, 05:43 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Re: Scene with no dialogue

Hi Guys,

Please see below what I have written and maybe this will help with my answer. It doesn't read entirely exciting as I constantly have to use the word 'box'. All the items have a reason for...
Forum: Screenwriting 06-22-2019, 02:14 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 3,523
Posted By Jab2019
Scene with no dialogue

Hi Guys,

I was wondering if you could help. I have been reading Story Maps to help my formatting and have a question regarding action scenes. I have a few scenes which are basically a character...
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