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Forum: Films 06-15-2019, 10:58 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 163
Posted By bioprofessor
Mr. Nobody

Watched this last night. Blew me away - story, acting, cinematography, sound, etc. Why this wasn't a sensation here, is a complete mystery.

Mr. Nobody (https://youtu.be/mpi0qsp3v_w)

In 2092 the...
Forum: Screenwriting 05-11-2019, 06:09 PM
Replies: 97
Views: 3,009
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Log The Line... LOGLINES

I honestly didn't see yours, Joe. I didn't have time or the energy to wade through some of the longer posts.

BTW, I wrote the last of those three loglines.;)
Forum: Screenwriting 05-11-2019, 01:24 PM
Replies: 97
Views: 3,009
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Log The Line... LOGLINES

A writerly person can distinguish between a poorly written, unimaginative logline, and a good one that'll grab the reader and force him to lean in to his phone screen. Same goes for the first...
Forum: Writing Exercises 10-25-2018, 04:01 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 2,511
Posted By bioprofessor
Forum: Writing Exercises 10-24-2018, 05:18 PM
Replies: 49
Views: 2,511
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Halloween contest - GHOST TOWN

Extension, please. Sunday, 10/28?
Forum: Writing Exercises 10-10-2018, 04:48 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 2,511
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Halloween contest - GHOST TOWN

I'm outlining an outline in the creative space in my head... which is a bit of a ghost town at the moment. :)
Forum: Writing Exercises 09-27-2018, 03:56 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 2,511
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Halloween contest - GHOST TOWN

All yours, Derek. You do a great job!
Forum: Writing Exercises 09-26-2018, 03:21 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 2,511
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Halloween contest - GHOST TOWN

I'm in. A little inspiration: Ghost Bikes (https://vimeo.com/243579287)
Forum: Screenwriting 09-20-2018, 05:33 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,044
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: To elide

I wouldn't overlook the value of the "quieter" vignettes in a movie. Like all other elements of the story, they should serve to further the narrative, albeit in a subtle way. One of my favorites...
Forum: Films 09-15-2018, 04:36 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 393
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Dial-A-Ride

My pleasure. It's good to know that simple stories can become powerful messages of inspiration in the hands of skillful, creative people.
Forum: Films 09-14-2018, 05:24 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 393
Posted By bioprofessor
Dial-A-Ride

A short doc about old people riding a bus. Starting at 10:58, my view of "psychic mediums" radically changed.

https://vimeo.com/superfolkfilms/dial-a-ride
Forum: Writing Exercises 08-08-2018, 05:35 AM
Replies: 49
Views: 2,511
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Summer Camp - New Deadline Saturday July 21

Speaking of "blood"...

Halloween contest prompt? This place has become a GHOST TOWN.

I'm figuring a literal or figurative take would work.

Mod edit: for posterity, the entries thread is here...
Forum: Writing Exercises 07-30-2018, 05:06 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 502
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Results - "Summer Camp" writing contest

Congratulations to all the writers who entered, and to the folks who took the time to read and vote. My votes and brief comments:

1. Camp Noose Camp
2. Sweet Summer Rosie
3. Vamp Camp

Warning: ...
Forum: Writing Exercises 07-22-2018, 04:37 AM
Replies: 55
Views: 5,667
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Summer Camp - New Deadline Saturday July 21

Hello and welcome. These "contests" help everyone who participates (writers and readers) improve their craft. Spread the word, this place needs an infusion of fresh "blood."
Forum: Writing Exercises 07-20-2018, 06:10 PM
Replies: 55
Views: 5,667
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Summer Camp - New Deadline Saturday July 21

Mine's in!

C'mon writers. Push it!
Forum: Writing Exercises 07-15-2018, 04:55 AM
Replies: 55
Views: 5,667
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Summer Camp - deadline Friday 13 July

Bravo! Mine will be in.

Thanks!
Forum: Writing Exercises 06-21-2018, 09:47 AM
Replies: 55
Views: 5,667
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Summer Camp

Got a theme and a rough idea for a plot. I'm in.
Forum: Screenwriting 03-19-2018, 04:00 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,194
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Communicating Energy to the Page

This is such great advice.

I think this scene from Pleasantville (below), although it has nothing to do with dancing, gets to the core dramatic theme you're trying to convey. If you think about it,...
Forum: Writing Exercises 02-21-2018, 03:48 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,247
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Results - Valentine's 2018 contest

Congrats to StoryWriter and all the writers who entered! As I mentioned to DPat, I thought the field this time was quite strong. We do a lot of "talking" about writing on the DDP Forums, but...
Forum: Writing Exercises 02-19-2018, 05:27 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 3,608
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: I Just Got Dumped! (Valentine's Day exercise, deadline Feb 14th)

Sent my votes to Derek a couple days ago. Will post some brief notes on each entry after the results.
Forum: Basics 02-18-2018, 11:41 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,874
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Singing

Not a pro, but no one has thrown a tomato at me for doing it like this...

JOHN
(singing)
Oh, we're the...
Forum: Writing Exercises 02-13-2018, 03:26 AM
Replies: 60
Views: 3,608
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: I Just Got Dumped! (Valentine's Day exercise, deadline Feb 14th)

Mine's in!

Some inspiration: Valentine's Day Break Up (https://vimeo.com/2558366).
Forum: Writing Exercises 02-11-2018, 10:24 AM
Replies: 60
Views: 3,608
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: I Just Got Dumped!

OMG! Just reads this. So funny. So true.
Forum: Writing Exercises 02-10-2018, 01:31 PM
Replies: 60
Views: 3,608
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: I Just Got Dumped! (Valentine's Day exercise, deadline Feb 14th)

Should have something ready in a day or two. Don't judge me if I'm 8.5! :D
Forum: Writing TV 01-21-2018, 05:42 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,172
Posted By bioprofessor
Re: Help going from film to TV

Wonderfully clear, concise advice in this thread. Kudos to the OP and the responders.
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