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Old 11-04-2015, 01:59 AM   #24
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Default Re: Results - Halloween 2015 fun short screenplay contest

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Hey, Road Warrior, now you understand why it was The Lighthouse and not, say--Devil's Cauldron.

But I did describe the bar : A typical-fake Irish bar, wood and polished brass. On the wall above the counter a scaled-down Lighthouse model, complete with light.

Cheers.
Yeah, that's right, I slipped up didn't I. Missed the bonus point details, but, in defence, I might have preferred to see a lighthouse heavyweight paperweight behind the bar, used later in the story to bump a character over the head perhaps, and preferred that the bar was named something like: "The Drink in here and all types of horrid horror film things are likely to happen to you, Saloon" instead.
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