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Old 07-06-2016, 12:59 AM   #4
JoeBanks
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Default Re: Pilot Question on an Act Out

the stronger act out (imo) would be the gun on the victim before the shot and not knowing what the outcome might be.

that to me is suspense, versus going out on the shock of the act of killing itself
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