Originally Posted by ManbunShiva
Good points, stair.
1) probably not. I could dissect it till kingdom come!
2) If I had to lead with any material, this would be it.
3) initial feedback coming in is encouraging/positive.
Now what besides fussing and fretting?
I would query managers and producers who show interest in your genre (imbd is a great tool for that). If nothing else, your pilot can be used as a great writing sample, opening doors.
I know a few people will disagree, but the Black List has been a great way to get my TV projects out there (I've had several meetings and offers directly from the site).
Best of luck!