Originally Posted by JoeNYC
Hey, bioprofessor, why isn't my version one of the choices? You probably searched the internet for professionals that written these loglines, but I'll give my opinion anyway.
The first choice is boring. The second choice gives the impression that the "aging patriarch" is the protagonist, so that leaves the last choice and just because I choose the last version doesn't mean it's the best logline representation that could be written for THE GODFATHER.
It only means it's the best of the worst.
I honestly didn't see yours, Joe. I didn't have time or the energy to wade through some of the longer posts.
BTW, I wrote the last of those three loglines.