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Old 03-15-2020, 10:44 PM   #6
Southern_land
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Default Re: 2 characters, same location, parallel universe logline help please

Just me... but I'd go for something like

INT. HOTEL ROOM (LINE_A) - INT

INT. HOTEL ROOM (LINE_B) - INT


that gives you the ability to very clearly define to any reader where they are irrespective of who's inhabiting that universe at that time. It also gives you 24 other universe and really that should be enough for anyone
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