Hello guys,
Which way is better to introduce action between the same character dialogue?
This is just an example:
Example 1:
John
What??
John gets up.
John
Are you serious??
Example 2:
John
What??
(John gets up.)
Are you serious??
Also in the action sentence, should I use John or just he?
Thanks!
Which way is better to introduce action between the same character dialogue?
This is just an example:
Example 1:
John
What??
John gets up.
John
Are you serious??
Example 2:
John
What??
(John gets up.)
Are you serious??
Also in the action sentence, should I use John or just he?
Thanks!
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