Re: Paying Homage... How to Format this Scene...
Bio, nice. I visualized everything but when they first enter the Hall.
Is the huge room deserted except for the paintings and perhaps a string quartet?
Does the music captivate them?
I think it would be more effective it you show us what mesmerizes Cassie rather than tell us she is mesmerized by grandeur and beauty.
Just some thoughts to kick up the introduction to the scene.
Originally posted by bioprofessor
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Is the huge room deserted except for the paintings and perhaps a string quartet?
Does the music captivate them?
I think it would be more effective it you show us what mesmerizes Cassie rather than tell us she is mesmerized by grandeur and beauty.
Just some thoughts to kick up the introduction to the scene.
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