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Old 04-26-2009, 12:39 PM   #1
Cinema Paradiso
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Default Family History

Anyone know anything about this? I'm curious what the logline is. From trackingb:

FAMILY HISTORY

Representation: Rob Carlson (WMA)

Written by: Michael Punke

NATIONAL TREASURE meets BACK TO THE FUTURE. Writer was supervised by Cormac & Marianne Wibberly.
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Old 04-26-2009, 06:51 PM   #2
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Default Re: Family History

Read this.

It just dragged on and on until the inciting event around page 30. It's supposed to be like National Treasure meets The Time Machine. But the execution was lame.

Well, I could be wrong. I stopped reading after around page 35 when the protagonists go back in time to deal with Marco Polo and Kublai Khan.
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Old 04-28-2009, 03:47 PM   #3
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Well, darn it all.

I'm working on a script with a similair concept.

Exactly how lame is "lame?"
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