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Old 04-05-2012, 01:22 PM   #1
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Hey guys,

I have no connection to this script analyst other than being a satisfied customer.

Not sure how many of you have used fiverr, but there's currently a script analyst on there offering notes for $5.

http://fiverr.com/trapperab/read-your-screenplay

What you'll get for $5:

- General insights/comments from an experienced writer/analyst.
- A page by page review of what "struck" the reader. (approx. 3 pages)
- Quality, Straight to the point, actionable notes.
- A low-cost alternative to other services.
- Super fast turnaround (currently at 1-3 days)

What you won't get:

- A full coverage
- Synopsis
- Grading system, etc.

Most beneficial to those of you who simply want a fresh set of eyes on their work.

Cheers,

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Old 04-05-2012, 03:23 PM   #2
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Not sure how many of you have used fiverr, but there's currently a script analyst on there offering notes for $5.
Bizarre... is this guy mentally ill? Even if he's living in Uganda that's a piss-poor rate.

I am tempted to give it a try, just to see what kind of hijinks ensue.
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Old 04-09-2012, 07:06 AM   #3
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Yes. Seems very odd, if not way too generous. and you know what they say: When something seems too good...

That said, Paul if you're willing to gamble on $5, then please do report back in. lol.

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Old 04-09-2012, 10:08 AM   #4
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Yes. Seems very odd, if not way too generous. and you know what they say: When something seems too good...

That said, Paul if you're willing to gamble on $5, then please do report back in. lol.
I gave it a whirl. It's completely worth $5. He gave me some pretty decent notes, demonstrating he read the whole script, with a turnaround time of 3-4 hours. It seems ridiculous, but he's legit and perhaps he has some mad master plan that makes this worth his while.
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Old 04-09-2012, 01:59 PM   #5
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Maybe for testimonials? Thanks for checking back in Paul.

Anyone else giving this a spin?

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Old 04-09-2012, 04:46 PM   #6
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It says on the site "gig paused"...guess he was inundated with five dollar reads.
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Old 04-09-2012, 04:50 PM   #7
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It says on the site "gig paused"...guess he was inundated with five dollar reads.
I didn't see where it said that...?

In any case, I'm going to jump on this if it's still available.
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Old 04-11-2012, 12:54 AM   #8
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Yes. Seems very odd, if not way too generous. and you know what they say: When something seems too good...
Who the hell can afford to live on $1.00 an hour? Nobody within 200 miles of the Paramount lot. Unless this is a loss leader to build a client base it makes no sense.
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Old 04-11-2012, 06:23 AM   #9
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Bizarre... is this guy mentally ill? Even if he's living in Uganda that's a piss-poor rate.
Either a very rich guy doing good Samaritan or... well... I don't know what to think about. I'd rather stay away
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Old 06-07-2012, 06:07 AM   #10
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Okay, so I tried on of these services (not the one Hendrix linked to) as a "what the hell" sort of thing. I received a bunch of notes as messages and at first, they pointed out problems I missed, and I got a PDF with notes on it. I gave good feedback on the amount of work done alone.

But then I actually read the notes. Again, some of it was pointing out problems, but some of it showed a lack of understanding for the characters. He wasn't really giving me notes on how to better accomplish what I wanted to accomplish, but his alternative story.

All in all, a lot of the problems pointed out was a big help, but the suggestions on where to take the story and characters, notsomuch.
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