Re: Actbreakdown.com - Script Notes and Analysis
Hi Done Dealers!
For the next few weeks of summer, I'm offering an a la carte version of my services: a $200/script read, with detailed page notes, for feature scripts under 120 pages.
As always, I spend 4-6 hours reading your material, noting EVERYTHING that bumps my read. This includes dense or overwritten action lines, mismatched tonal choices, bumpy dialogue, awkward structural choices, passive hero, confusing beats, long-winded or superfluous scenes, incorrect slugs or formatting, etc. While this doesn't officially include grammar or spelling proofing, if I see something I will note it.
These page notes include analysis asides within the context of your script, for instance, "This may be too early to introduce this character: The reader will assume she's the hero, when she's only a secondary character. I suggest you move her introduction to follow your hero's intro."
Because of the time-intensive nature of my notes, this price ONLY includes detailed margin notes of your entire PDF script.
If you'd like an additional global summary/analysis, which ties in the notes after the read, and includes both general and specific recommendations for improving your draft, you can add that on for $100.
As a thank-you for using my services (whether only page-notes or page-notes + analysis) I'll enroll you in my on-demand screenwriting class ($125 value, learn on your schedule) for free:
https://actbreakdown.teachable.com/p...-screenwriting
If you're interested, or if you have any questions, email me: actbreakdown at gmail dot com.
Thanks - and Happy Writing!
Best,
Amanda
Hi Done Dealers!
For the next few weeks of summer, I'm offering an a la carte version of my services: a $200/script read, with detailed page notes, for feature scripts under 120 pages.
As always, I spend 4-6 hours reading your material, noting EVERYTHING that bumps my read. This includes dense or overwritten action lines, mismatched tonal choices, bumpy dialogue, awkward structural choices, passive hero, confusing beats, long-winded or superfluous scenes, incorrect slugs or formatting, etc. While this doesn't officially include grammar or spelling proofing, if I see something I will note it.
These page notes include analysis asides within the context of your script, for instance, "This may be too early to introduce this character: The reader will assume she's the hero, when she's only a secondary character. I suggest you move her introduction to follow your hero's intro."
Because of the time-intensive nature of my notes, this price ONLY includes detailed margin notes of your entire PDF script.
If you'd like an additional global summary/analysis, which ties in the notes after the read, and includes both general and specific recommendations for improving your draft, you can add that on for $100.
As a thank-you for using my services (whether only page-notes or page-notes + analysis) I'll enroll you in my on-demand screenwriting class ($125 value, learn on your schedule) for free:
https://actbreakdown.teachable.com/p...-screenwriting
If you're interested, or if you have any questions, email me: actbreakdown at gmail dot com.
Thanks - and Happy Writing!
Best,
Amanda
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