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Old 06-09-2011, 02:35 PM   #1
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Default Average length for a take?

"I just secured the rights to a hot property and would love to hear your take on it".


What's the average length for a "take". Quick pitch/logline? Few lines synopsis?
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Old 06-09-2011, 05:31 PM   #2
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Default Re: Average length for a take?

Start small and build from there.

"I'd do something like Unforgiven; two old partners team up for one last job, but it turns out the killers are aliens." Or whatever the hell.

If they bite, keep working. Expand to a few paragraphs or a page or two.

If they hate it, start over.

I've made the mistake once too many times of creating elaborate, 5 page/20 minutes pitches built around a central conceit the people just don't like.
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Old 06-10-2011, 12:05 PM   #3
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Default Re: Average length for a take?

I've heard this from agents-that if you have a commodity-you should put that in the forward, i.e. something that is based on a best selling novel ***...

Could be something like; this is based on Interviews with General Petraeus, about the war in Middle East.

I would start with that as a teaser and then move onto Premise(paragraph), containing the main characters and revelations...
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Old 06-12-2011, 03:34 PM   #4
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Default Re: Average length for a take?

Thanks guys. It's multiple takes on multiple properties in a single PDF file. I went with a title, genres, in the vein of, and a logline + synopsis. I can't pitch face-to-face, or on the phone, so I am a disadvantage to playing against their emotions. It's all a toss up.
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