I have two situations:
#1
A guy is walking out of a bar with someone and he wants to call out to a friend to follow them, so I just write:
"Guy #1 and Guy #2 start for the door. As they are passing the bar, Guy #1 calls out to Guy #3 to follow them."
Is that ok, or do I have to actually format it as dialogue?
#2
The other situation I have is that one guy is talking for a long time to Guy #2 and in the midst of this looong bit of dialogue he just says sorry to Guy #3 and I put that into action. Like this:
Guy #1
(to Guy #2)
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
As Guy #3 joins the group, Guy #1 turns to him and gives him a quick "sorry," then turns back to Guy #2 and continues.
Guy #1
(cont'd)
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
Again, is that ok, or should I format the sorry as dialogue?
#1
A guy is walking out of a bar with someone and he wants to call out to a friend to follow them, so I just write:
"Guy #1 and Guy #2 start for the door. As they are passing the bar, Guy #1 calls out to Guy #3 to follow them."
Is that ok, or do I have to actually format it as dialogue?
#2
The other situation I have is that one guy is talking for a long time to Guy #2 and in the midst of this looong bit of dialogue he just says sorry to Guy #3 and I put that into action. Like this:
Guy #1
(to Guy #2)
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
As Guy #3 joins the group, Guy #1 turns to him and gives him a quick "sorry," then turns back to Guy #2 and continues.
Guy #1
(cont'd)
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
dialogue, dialogue, dialogue
Again, is that ok, or should I format the sorry as dialogue?
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