My second film (this one's a talkie!)

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  • My second film (this one's a talkie!)

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?featur...&v=RvhPdICEKgE

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    Great job! I liked that. Thanks for posting.

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    • #3
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      Loved this. Completely charming.
      Ring-a-ding-ding, baby.

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      • #4
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        Excellent!

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        • #5
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          Very, very good - well done!
          My stuff

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          • #6
            Re: My second film (this one's a talkie!)

            That was terrific. Great concept and execution. Well-done!

            My website:www.marjorykaptanoglu.com

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            • #7
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              Loved it! Nicely done... Looking forward to the next one.

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              • #8
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                Dig it!

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                  I think I remember you posting about this before, and I thought it was a good concept. Congratulations that you got it done. It was quite enjoyable. There were parts where I couldn't read what was on the paper - was that on purpose, or am I the only one? I think you should consider expanding this concept to a feature script, if you haven't already, obviously reworking the story to fit. Good work, and thank you for posting it!
                  "The Hollywood film business is a cruel and shallow money trench, a long plastic hallway where thieves and pimps run free, and good men die like dogs. There's also a negative side." Hunter S Thompson

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                  • #10
                    Re: My second film (this one's a talkie!)

                    Loved it!!!!
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                      Re: My second film (this one's a talkie!)

                      This was awesome! Great job!
                      Stuff I Do - http://www.youtube.com/user/celluloidsimple

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                      • #12
                        Re: My second film (this one's a talkie!)

                        Loved it! Great work all around.
                        Advice from writer, Kelly Sue DeConnick. "Try this: if you can replace your female character with a sexy lamp and the story still basically works, maybe you need another draft.-

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