Is it a newbie mistake to not name the city your story takes place in? They city in my story doesn't really matter - could be any American/Canadian city with a bustling downtown. How is it received when you just have EXT. CITY - DOWNTOWN, opposed to EXT. SAN FRANSISCO - DOWNTOWN?
Is naming the city your story is set in important?
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Originally posted by Filmmagician View PostIs it a newbie mistake to not name the city your story takes place in? They city in my story doesn't really matter - could be any American/Canadian city with a bustling downtown. How is it received when you just have EXT. CITY - DOWNTOWN, opposed to EXT. SAN FRANSISCO - DOWNTOWN?
Nobody's going to care, and, I mean, they'll probably shoot it in New Orleans or Atlanta or Vancouver anyway. So on one level it doesn't matter at all.
On the other hand, I think it's a useful thing for you, as a writer. Because San Francisco is very different from Chicago, and setting it in a specific city will help inform who your characters are and help you make strong, specific choices which bring them to life.
eg, "She works in tech venture capital in San Francisco" paints a very different picture from, "She works in advertising on Madison avenue," which is very different from, "She's a post-production supervisor in Los Angeles" and if what you tell me, "She works in an office in a city" I don't know which of those (or 1000 other options) you mean.
Good writing flows from specific choices, so if you don't know, or don't have an opinion, there's a real risk that your characters are less vivid and real than they could be.
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Originally posted by Ronaldinho View PostYes and no.
Nobody's going to care, and, I mean, they'll probably shoot it in New Orleans or Atlanta or Vancouver anyway. So on one level it doesn't matter at all.
On the other hand, I think it's a useful thing for you, as a writer. Because San Francisco is very different from Chicago, and setting it in a specific city will help inform who your characters are and help you make strong, specific choices which bring them to life.
eg, "She works in tech venture capital in San Francisco" paints a very different picture from, "She works in advertising on Madison avenue," which is very different from, "She's a post-production supervisor in Los Angeles" and if what you tell me, "She works in an office in a city" I don't know which of those (or 1000 other options) you mean.
Good writing flows from specific choices, so if you don't know, or don't have an opinion, there's a real risk that your characters are less vivid and real than they could be.
Never the less, what you said rang true, and if it helps the writing then I'll pick a city. The bitch of it is that now I have to name specific streets and again, that's not an important thing. "Downtown street/ally/building" is all I need, with some quick descriptions.
Thanks again for the reply and insight. Much appreesh.
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Originally posted by Filmmagician View PostMy hero gets fired in the first 3 pages, and supporting character works at a cafe - a job he hates. So, their jobs are more a conflict/hurdle than expressing who they are. Barista in LA or Barista in Seattle or Vancouver is a barista.
You could drop me in a random nice coffee shop/cafe in Los Angeles or San Francisco and I would probably be able to tell instantly, just from the customers, which city we were in.
It may not matter that much for your story, but it does help paint a specific picture in my mind, which is useful when you're trying to convey a lot of information in as few words as possible.
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Originally posted by Ronaldinho View PostIs it?
You could drop me in a random nice coffee shop/cafe in Los Angeles or San Francisco and I would probably be able to tell instantly, just from the customers, which city we were in.
It may not matter that much for your story, but it does help paint a specific picture in my mind, which is useful when you're trying to convey a lot of information in as few words as possible.
Yeah. Very true. Think it hurts more no not be specific with a city.
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You could drop me in a random nice coffee shop/cafe in Los Angeles or San Francisco and I would probably be able to tell instantly, just from the customers, which city we were in.
I live in a town where you can drive from one side of the city to the other in ten minutes.
"The fact that you have seen professionals write poorly is no reason for you to imitate them." - ComicBent.
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Pinpointing where your story takes place isn't important, but giving a sense of what area of the world your characters inhabit is.
The script that landed me on this year's Black List does not take place in any named city, but it does take place in the Appalachians.
Which, as a reader, gives you enough info to be able to imagine the setting and the people that inhabit it.
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Originally posted by ComicBent View PostOh, all of you cosmopolitan types!
I live in a town where you can drive from one side of the city to the other in ten minutes.
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Getting back on topic, some cities echo some themes...decay and decline in Detroit for example.
What do different cities bring to mind and would any particular city have qualities to echo theme.
Silicon Valley
Chicago
New Orleans
Fargo
Dallas
Miami
etc... they bring to mind some different images and are populated by differing peoples.
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One shouldn't over-do this sort of thing, but occasionally there is a right time to use something geographical to emphasize a point...
Addresses
Jesse James Drive vs. Jonathon B. Bohring Avenue
Employers
Futuretech Endeavors Corp vs Smithson Grout and Tile
Cities
Miami vs Cleveland
One set of choices is more vibrant than the other.
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Re: Is naming the city your story is set in important?
Originally posted by Filmmagician View PostThey city in my story doesn't really matter - could be any American/Canadian city with a bustling downtown. How is it received when you just have EXT. CITY - DOWNTOWN, opposed to EXT. SAN FRANSISCO - DOWNTOWN?"Friends make the worst enemies." Frank Underwood
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Depends on the story. I wrote one where my character had to travel to one city from another city to find out who and where her real parents lived."A screenwriter is much like being a fire hydrant with a bunch of dogs lined up around it.- -Frank Miller
"A real writer doesn't just want to write; a real writer has to write." -Alan Moore
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