The specific line of description I'm having trouble with involves this mysterious character, who we know to be somewhat ill spirited, who then shows up unexpectedly with another character who hasn't met her.
I want to describe how the character gives off an uneasy feeling and how her overly friendly speech is inconsistent with her previous character traits.
What I was working with when something like this, "Crystal's response feels overly friendly, a detour from her usual..." Yeah, I'm struggling with this one.
Any ideas?
I want to describe how the character gives off an uneasy feeling and how her overly friendly speech is inconsistent with her previous character traits.
What I was working with when something like this, "Crystal's response feels overly friendly, a detour from her usual..." Yeah, I'm struggling with this one.
Any ideas?
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