Re: Breaking up a long scene
I'm thinking I don't anymore. I'm just working on nuancing.
Honestly, all the times I read it it didn't read long. It only became an issue when I thought, "hey, this is 10 pages! Is that too long," hence my post.
Originally posted by Crayon
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Honestly, all the times I read it it didn't read long. It only became an issue when I thought, "hey, this is 10 pages! Is that too long," hence my post.
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