Re: Disciple Program Sells w/Mark Wahlberg
Because that's how we learn.
Read over the threads. The problems cited are SPECIFIC screenwriting problems: OTN dialogue, unbelievable plot turns, unfilmable action, weak characters, Act 2 filler, Act 3 fizzle, action-movie clichés, on and on and on.
Conversly, the good stuff is mostly what words he used, he has a cool style, he is a nice guy, he deserves to sell for trying, he networked and won people over, his agent loves him, etc.
Originally posted by Why One
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Read over the threads. The problems cited are SPECIFIC screenwriting problems: OTN dialogue, unbelievable plot turns, unfilmable action, weak characters, Act 2 filler, Act 3 fizzle, action-movie clichés, on and on and on.
Conversly, the good stuff is mostly what words he used, he has a cool style, he is a nice guy, he deserves to sell for trying, he networked and won people over, his agent loves him, etc.
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