I think the following is clear enough so you can at least figure out what the scene is supposed to look like. But is it actually as clear as it should/can be?
Clear?
Or do I need to say something along the lines of, "He's not actually here, but on a TV screen -- watched by a roomful of wealthy-looking people..."
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FADE IN: INT. OLD-MONEY MANSION, LIVING ROOM - NIGHT SENATOR JONES beams, smiling his big, attractive smile, as a roomful of unseen people LAUGH heartily. He's seen on a huge TV in this large, beautifully decorated room, as 90 people in expensive-looking cocktail attire watch attentively. This is a $25,000-per-couple political fundraiser. SENATOR JONES But again, I'm truly sorry I can't be there with you tonight.
Or do I need to say something along the lines of, "He's not actually here, but on a TV screen -- watched by a roomful of wealthy-looking people..."
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