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Old 08-06-2013, 08:55 PM   #231
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Default Re: Will you consider rating my blcklst hosted script?

Recently uploaded my first script to TBL, so have yet to receive a rating.

But I discovered this Thread, thought it was kind of cool, and thought I'd jump on the bandwagon.

Any views, ratings, and whatnot -- whatever that may be -- would be appreciated.

Ergo ...

WEST THIRD

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10457
Dramatic Comedy, Family Drama

Log Line: After the sudden death of her brother, a woman begins to question her own life as she untangles the secrets of who he was and who he loved.
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Old 08-08-2013, 09:02 PM   #232
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Hi all, posted a new one. Waiting for reviews...
THE REBBE AND THE GERMAN
Based on a true story--- In 1939 Poland a half- Jewish German Army intelligence officer leads a secret mission to find the Lubavitcher Rebbe and bring him to safety as the SS pursues both of them.
https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9322
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Old 08-16-2013, 10:55 AM   #233
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Just uploaded my new one.

THE 24 HOUR NIGHT

LOGLINE: A Native American physicist, part of a classified team of scientists on call to respond to extraterrestrial contact, races against time to find the answers of why our world is plunged into total darkness for twenty-four hours.


https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10674

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Old 08-16-2013, 01:15 PM   #234
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Arrow Re: H.G. Wells' The Chronic Argonuats

Our screenplay for H.G. Wells' The Chronic Argonauts is back on The Black List with a new draft.

Logline: Adapted from the FIRST time-travel adventure! An eccentric scientist searching for his own 'golden age' and a grieving preacher form an unlikely pair on a time-travel adventure that takes them from the 1880s into a dystopian future.

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10438
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Old 08-16-2013, 02:36 PM   #235
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Default Re: Will you consider rating my blcklst hosted script?

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Okay, my script just got hammered with its first rating. I think it's better than the score it received (shocking, I know), but I did make some changes and I'd be incredibly grateful to anyone who's willing to give it a shot.

CROSSFIRE
action/thriller

"A thief discovers a mysterious girl in the trunk of a stolen car and must help her escape from a relentless pursuer who wants her dead."

Previous reader did point out that the script features an engaging protagonist and an edgy, complex villain.

https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9654

Thanks!
@esporter

Read this last weekend. On the whole I thought it was pretty good. A couple of the violent scenes were a little OTT (took me out of the read a little) but understand you need those 'standout' moments.

Tripp was a pretty engaging character too. Good luck with it.

edit - also, the log is a little misleading, but again, can understand why you've gone with it.
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Old 08-17-2013, 03:12 PM   #236
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OK - I'll throw one on the pile:

LOOKING FOR THE PONY - comedy/drama

Shes lost in a horrific past hes lost on Wilshire Boulevard. She can lead him home, but can the bumbling TV detective avenge her before dementia claims him?

Any attention appreciated!
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Old 08-27-2013, 02:56 PM   #237
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OK, try this on.

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10737

ROAD RAGE YOUR FACE

A trainer in Non-Violence has to get violent when he teams up with a Lord of the Rings fan club and goes on a quest to find his grandfather's legendary Alaskan gold hoard.

Comedy / Action

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Old 08-28-2013, 09:20 AM   #238
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Hi, everyone. Long time reader, newbie poster.

I'll throw my hat in the ring:

SECOND PLACE HERO

Action/Adventure/Comedy

Logline: A bipolar theater geek heads to school and gets thrust into a role he never expected to play: a real-life hero who must stop a band of goons from kidnapping a fellow classmate.

I've pitched this as "Imagine if John Hughes wrote Die Hard..."

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9632

It's a 2013 Nicholl Semifinalist, and my BL evaluation got me an 8 overall, an 8 for character and dialogue, and a 9 for plot. (When it made the Monday email, I received 29 views, 13 downloads, and an email from an interested party, so... woo-hoo Black List!).

The reader called Second Place Hero "evocative of early Shane Black: pitch black comedy and high-octane action" and "This is a blockbuster tale with an indie heart... What plot holes it has are easy to cover up, but even in its current state, this deserves to be seen."

The full evaluation is up on the site. I have revised the script to address some of the "weaknesses" mentioned in the evaluation and have uploaded it.

Thank you for your time and consideration,

Will

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Old 08-28-2013, 09:59 AM   #239
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Some nice 'traction' there Will - good luck with it.

The wait for my second paid read is killing me!
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Old 08-28-2013, 06:37 PM   #240
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This got a 7 the last time I uploaded it and I've since revised it.

ALTER
https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9696

Adventure/Drama/Superhero

Logline: Ben, a superhero-obsessed 11-year-old, is forced to do a month of community service after a failed attempt at vigilantism runs him afoul of the law. But when he strikes up an unlikely friendship with a contentious drunk, little does he know that the old man is hiding a big secret - his real identity as a retired superhero.

Also just uploaded this script:

THE ABOMINABLE
https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10676

Horror

Logline: In 1951 after the first footprint photographs of the fabled Yeti are taken, an obsessive naturalist travels to Mount Everest to find the creature and make one last discovery.

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