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Old 09-21-2013, 08:27 AM   #251
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My Black List script:


https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/5043

The Fisherman

An American woman goes in search of her family history to a small Irish village in the west of the Ireland and clashes with her only neighbor, a bitter ex-convict who spent years in jail for an IRA murder he didnít commit, and who has now inherited her grandfather's tumble-down cottage and all its contents.
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Old 11-06-2013, 06:18 AM   #252
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Hey everyone, this my script:

Title: HUNTED

Logline: A haunted man with nothing to lose, goes up against an international human-trafficking cartel to save a little girl, so that she may save him back.

I have no downloads or ratings yet. My script passed to the second round of the Austin film festival screenplay competition.

What do you guys think about the logline? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/8191

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Old 11-06-2013, 06:16 PM   #253
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Logline: A haunted man with nothing to lose, goes up against an international human-trafficking cartel to save a little girl, so that she may save him back.
Needs more detail. Who is the protag? An ex-cop? Why is he haunted?

More importanly, why go to so much trouble for this girl?
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Old 11-07-2013, 02:56 AM   #254
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Ok you got a point there, it needs a little more information:

Bobby is a repairman. His life is falling part and the only thing that’s keeping him together is the Job. He stumbles on a safe house for an international human trafficking network. The absolute horror and the enormous size of the pedophile material drives him to seek revenge for all those lost children. He has found a new mission in life, one that has meaning. Things get very dangerous when he decides to save a little girl from kidnapping.

How about this one?

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/8191

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Old 11-07-2013, 03:19 AM   #255
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"After stumbling upon an international child trafficking ring, a down and out repairman goes on a blood-spalattering mission to save one special little girl."
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Old 11-07-2013, 03:22 AM   #256
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I'll think about it, thanks for the reply.
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Old 11-10-2013, 03:51 PM   #257
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JESSE'S GOLD

LOGLINE:
When a small time truck thief named Jesse James steals a government big-rig she thinks is loaded with treasure, a federal agent finds himself with limited time to convince her to reveal her location before catastrophe.

Drama- Action thriller. Rated R.

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Old 11-11-2013, 09:04 PM   #258
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RACKET

Logline: In 1930ís America, the mostdecorated man in U.S. military history, Smedley Butler, faces his greatestbattle yet, thwarting an attempt at a Presidential coup by a group of wealthybusinessmen.

Salient line from hypothetical trailer: In the vein of ARGO or ZERO DARK THIRTY or ALL THEPRESIDENTíS MEN, comes an American story so incredible about a man soremarkable, it could only have happened in real life.

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Old 11-12-2013, 11:00 AM   #259
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Has anyone even gotten any industry downloads, or even views, from this? I have to assume just peer views. But still curious.
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Old 11-12-2013, 11:14 AM   #260
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My script has been on for a week and I just got 6 views and a non-unique download, whatever that means.
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