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Old 01-27-2014, 07:00 PM   #301
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Default Re: Will you consider rating my blcklst hosted script?

My BL script:

"Kepler" - Low Bud Sci Fi/Drama/Thriller

Logline: In the final days of a five-year mission to explore the Earth-like planet Kepler, Patrick Spence encounters a clone of himself and begins to question why he’s there and what secrets have been kept from both of them.

What the reviewer had to say:

"This script is centered around a strong concept that leads to lots of intrigue such as why smoke emanates from the forest, and why a number of clones have been placed on identical ships all around Kepler. The role of Patrick and his clones should be appealing to talented actors as it presents unique challenges. This script has a number of particularly powerful images and moments. The pile of dead Patricks in the woods being one, the reveal that Christopher and Nadia are dead a second, and the line “They’re not coming to get you” a third. The clones bonding over memories of Nadia is a nice touch as well. The scene in which Patrick is locked in a ship that he knows will be filled with poison is a good, tense beat in the story."
https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/14169
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Old 01-28-2014, 10:11 PM   #302
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Average through our first twelve months was 10.5 days. If it takes longer than three weeks, you get a free month of hosting.

You can see more data along these lines in our Annual Report.
I got my last review at 2 weeks and 6 days...so close to the free month! I ended up being more excited about that than the actual review, haha.
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Old 01-29-2014, 03:25 AM   #303
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Actually, I can't wait to see what the reader will say, I've gotten some good reviews from the Austin film festival readers and I'm hoping the trend will continue.

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/8191

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Old 01-29-2014, 10:21 AM   #304
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Actually, I can't wait to see what the reader will say, I've gotten some good reviews from the Austin film festival readers and I'm hoping the trend will continue.

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/manage/8191
You need to link to the script's "view' page not the script "manage" page (which only you can access).
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Old 01-29-2014, 10:25 AM   #305
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Oh, my mistake, here's the correct link, I've edited my previous post as well.

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/8191
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Old 01-29-2014, 11:51 AM   #306
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Hey,

I'd love to get some feedback on my pilot.

Series Logline:
"Welcome to America” is a gritty one-hour drama that explores the American Dream through the prism of a family of "coyotes"— illegal immigrant smugglers — in San Diego, California. The main protagonist is Jay Brennan, a former Border Patrol agent whose life is swirling out of control as he loses his job due to “cut backs.” His desperation leads him to getting involved in an illegal immigrant smuggling operation run by his sister and estranged father.

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Old 01-29-2014, 12:24 PM   #307
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This is my sitcom pilot - my evaluations aren't in yet, but I did set it to allow other writers to request a download so feel free.

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/13491
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Old 01-29-2014, 12:58 PM   #308
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This is my sitcom pilot - my evaluations aren't in yet, but I did set it to allow other writers to request a download so feel free.

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/13491
Just sent you a request...
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Old 01-29-2014, 01:08 PM   #309
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My BL script:

"Kepler" - Low Bud Sci Fi/Drama/Thriller

Logline: In the final days of a five-year mission to explore the Earth-like planet Kepler, Patrick Spence encounters a clone of himself and begins to question why he’s there and what secrets have been kept from both of them.

What the reviewer had to say:

"This script is centered around a strong concept that leads to lots of intrigue such as why smoke emanates from the forest, and why a number of clones have been placed on identical ships all around Kepler. The role of Patrick and his clones should be appealing to talented actors as it presents unique challenges. This script has a number of particularly powerful images and moments. The pile of dead Patricks in the woods being one, the reveal that Christopher and Nadia are dead a second, and the line “They’re not coming to get you” a third. The clones bonding over memories of Nadia is a nice touch as well. The scene in which Patrick is locked in a ship that he knows will be filled with poison is a good, tense beat in the story."
https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/14169
Now that is a good idea, to post a little of what the reviewer said.
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Old 01-29-2014, 07:35 PM   #310
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A little self-promotion never hurt anyone:

https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/14634

The Berzerkers (Action/Adventure/Comedy)

A team of disabled vets unwillingly reunite when their former commander drops a bombshell on them: the terrorist who caused their disabilities is in America to carry out a devastating attack, and they are the only ones that can stop it.
This could be good.
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