Re: The Disciple Program...
I liked the use of masticate actually. It's the ten thousand other unnecessary words in the descriptions that slowed the read to a slog for me. And the big fluffy speeches by the bad guys. It's a decent script but there are many others in semifinal levels of contests that exceed it.
Hey, I'm down with writers succeeding, but perhaps I'm seeing this thread differently than others. I thought we were here to talk about scripts, not just mindlessly cheerlead as if someone with any say-so is hovering over this thread with a button to destroy the chances of this script selling. This is just us writers talking shop and IMO, many better scripts are out there that deserve to get sold.
Originally posted by iggy
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Hey, I'm down with writers succeeding, but perhaps I'm seeing this thread differently than others. I thought we were here to talk about scripts, not just mindlessly cheerlead as if someone with any say-so is hovering over this thread with a button to destroy the chances of this script selling. This is just us writers talking shop and IMO, many better scripts are out there that deserve to get sold.
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