Again, here is a question about how explicit I need to be.
INT. THE HOUSE. DAY.
John and Mary are in a room, eating. Sound of a car arriving outside.
EXT. AT THE HOUSE. DAY.
A Volvo stops outside the house. Four armed men exit the car and walk up to the house. They bang on the front door.
INT. THE HOUSE. DAY.
John and Mary get up.
EXT. AT THE HOUSE. DAY.
The four men open fire.
INT. THE HOUSE. DAY.
John and Mary throw temselves on the floor.
Is all of this EXT and INT necessary? Is there a more economic way to describe the quick sequence of external and internal shots?
INT. THE HOUSE. DAY.
John and Mary are in a room, eating. Sound of a car arriving outside.
EXT. AT THE HOUSE. DAY.
A Volvo stops outside the house. Four armed men exit the car and walk up to the house. They bang on the front door.
INT. THE HOUSE. DAY.
John and Mary get up.
EXT. AT THE HOUSE. DAY.
The four men open fire.
INT. THE HOUSE. DAY.
John and Mary throw temselves on the floor.
Is all of this EXT and INT necessary? Is there a more economic way to describe the quick sequence of external and internal shots?
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