So a Development person told me they really like my script but one of their notes was that I should have a few "quiet moments" between the characters to give the reader time to catch up. My story is a sci-fi thriller that picks up steam and doesn't stop.
I guess I was looking for examples or ideas on what this looks like? I know it's sort of vague without knowing my script, but this is definitely a weak area in my writing. It's hard to imagine a scene where nothing happens or the plot isn't moved forward.
I guess I was looking for examples or ideas on what this looks like? I know it's sort of vague without knowing my script, but this is definitely a weak area in my writing. It's hard to imagine a scene where nothing happens or the plot isn't moved forward.
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