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Old 03-24-2020, 02:17 PM   #11
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Default Re: 2 characters, same location, parallel universe logline help please

The script is for an hour long TV episode, I've done 5 so far with rough drafts for a further two, this is meant to be the 8th. I thought it would be a good idea to do a quick story run through to see if it worked within 60-65 pages but it's proving to be the hardest now I've got to around page 6 and the whole parallel universe part is starting. In my head it's easy, but getting the slugline info right is harder.

It basically involves my two main characters going on a romantic getaway to a hotel. When they wake the next morning some things are not right and it's only when one of them goes to reception he ends up in a different universe and she goes to look for him and the same happens to her. Each universe is populated by different characters but all have one thing in common. At the end the hotels secret is figured out and the two universes come together bringing all the hotel guests back to the real world.

I will definitely read inception though, it may give me some ideas, plus I bet it's a good read in it's own right. Thank you for the reply.
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