Re: Using "We"
I've been reading old threads here, and there's a "we see" thread on every corner, I don't know how you could have missed them.
But another interesting thing I found was an example of why someone might be told to stop using "we see" and camera directions:
INT. RICK'S APARTMENT (BEDROOM) - EVENING
The answering machine comes into focus.
Ava turns back and looks down. We see what she's looking at: a pregnancy test stick. X marks the spot. She's pregnant.
I've been reading old threads here, and there's a "we see" thread on every corner, I don't know how you could have missed them.
But another interesting thing I found was an example of why someone might be told to stop using "we see" and camera directions:
INT. RICK'S APARTMENT (BEDROOM) - EVENING
A nude woman sits on Rick's bed. Our eyes fall upon the angel wings tattooed on her upper back. She turns around to face us. It's Ava.
The answering machine comes into focus.
Ava turns back and looks down. We see what she's looking at: a pregnancy test stick. X marks the spot. She's pregnant.
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