Hi Guys,
I was wondering if you could help.
I am writing a scene where a couple are at a fair. They start off on a Helter Skelter and then go on other attractions with different reactions. It is one persons first time at a fair.
They go into a haunted house next. I don't want to write about what happens in the haunted house as we all know what happens in them. It is simply to show them going in and then the reaction as they come out.
After this they go to some games and we see them after the games having won at one of them. I again, don't want to write about the games because we all know how hook a duck or ring toss works. It is more about the outcome and reactions.
I don't want to do it as a montage so am wondering do I just do a transition as in CUT TO?
Anyway, I hope this is kind of clear and any help would be much appreciated.
Thanks
James
I was wondering if you could help.
I am writing a scene where a couple are at a fair. They start off on a Helter Skelter and then go on other attractions with different reactions. It is one persons first time at a fair.
They go into a haunted house next. I don't want to write about what happens in the haunted house as we all know what happens in them. It is simply to show them going in and then the reaction as they come out.
After this they go to some games and we see them after the games having won at one of them. I again, don't want to write about the games because we all know how hook a duck or ring toss works. It is more about the outcome and reactions.
I don't want to do it as a montage so am wondering do I just do a transition as in CUT TO?
Anyway, I hope this is kind of clear and any help would be much appreciated.
Thanks
James
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