It's a comedy and one scene is 10 pages long.
As is, it reads quick and I think hilarious as one continuous scene, but part of me is thinking I have to break it up (even though, honestly I kinda don't want to).
What's the least intrusive way of doing it (having them walk to a different location, add in another scene, etc)?
As is, it reads quick and I think hilarious as one continuous scene, but part of me is thinking I have to break it up (even though, honestly I kinda don't want to).
What's the least intrusive way of doing it (having them walk to a different location, add in another scene, etc)?
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