Why not make the pivotal scene one of action, rather than one of dialogue?
While the hero is passed out drunk, a couple of bounty hunters show up. The heroine engages the bounty hunters in gun battle and kills them. The hero vows to quit drinking, and not endanger his woman with a life crime any more.
While the hero is passed out drunk, a couple of bounty hunters show up. The heroine engages the bounty hunters in gun battle and kills them. The hero vows to quit drinking, and not endanger his woman with a life crime any more.
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