hey all
i am writing the climax of my script which - surprise - involves a murder.
it's based on a real murder and frankly the murder itself is not that exciting. your classic "hitman intercepts dude on his way to work at 9 am and clumsily shoots him 3 times"
to spice things up a little, I was thinking of intercutting the murder with a rock concert that, in real life, took place a year after the murder.
So we have: daytime murder.
and we have: nighttime rock concert that occurred a year later.
can I legitimately intercut those two things?? is it weird to intercut between day and night, and also between two events that don't take place at the same time (though I could probably smudge that detail for dramatic purposes and present the concert as taking place the same day)
i am writing the climax of my script which - surprise - involves a murder.
it's based on a real murder and frankly the murder itself is not that exciting. your classic "hitman intercepts dude on his way to work at 9 am and clumsily shoots him 3 times"
to spice things up a little, I was thinking of intercutting the murder with a rock concert that, in real life, took place a year after the murder.
So we have: daytime murder.
and we have: nighttime rock concert that occurred a year later.
can I legitimately intercut those two things?? is it weird to intercut between day and night, and also between two events that don't take place at the same time (though I could probably smudge that detail for dramatic purposes and present the concert as taking place the same day)
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