Re: How important is voice in screenwriting?
I like the giggle.
I kind of cheated on mine.
Originally posted by sc111
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I kind of cheated on mine.
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A WOMAN, mid-twenties, gawks at her smartphone screen while pushing a BABY CARRIAGE along a busy street. She let's go of its handle, mutters under her breath and starts jabbing at the keyboard on her phone. The baby carriage slowly starts rolling down the sidewalk, then picks up speed as it heads into the street. The Woman, oblivious, is now yelling at her phone, while typing wildly. Tires screech. Horns honk. Drivers scream. In soundless slow motion the baby carriage rolls sedately through traffic, inches from the swerving, onrushing cars, then gently bumps up against the curb on the opposite side - where it safely rests. The Woman, still staring at her smartphone, blindly gropes for the baby carriage handle. She looks up - then left and right - her brow furrowed in confusion. The phone beeps, drawing her attention. She's gone again.
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