Re: On-the-Nose Dialogue
He sees a man going out at night. He sees a dog digging a hole. Nothing is graphic enough to suggest murder, so without the dialogue, you don't know what's going on.
I thought you were going away. Didn't you say you had to go?
Anyone who posts as often as you do must have the computer strapped to her chest.
(Hey, that's some good dialogue there. I'll use it!)...
Originally posted by maralyn
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Originally posted by maralyn
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Anyone who posts as often as you do must have the computer strapped to her chest.
(Hey, that's some good dialogue there. I'll use it!)...
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