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Old 11-08-2008, 01:41 PM   #1
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Default We don't need no Character Arc. Teachers, leave those screenwriters alone!


Hi all,

Re: CINEMA AND THE WORLD NEEDS A DIFFERENT KIND OF CHARACTER ARC...

Why would you want a “positive character arc” in your screenplay? Forget about it.

The world is changing and majority cinema goers want a “negative character arc”.

In the following example -- I would say the world would want to see ENDING # 2.

Do you agree?

ENDING #1

Upcoming model, Pari Hart, waits for her long career-making catwalk. Minutes from show time, she gets a message from an assistant disclosing that her best friend, Lisa May, an ex-model, died of a heroin overdose after she escaped rehab. Pari Hart decides not to go on stage and causes turmoil backstage. She dashes out, an emotional wreck. Three months later, we find out she gave up her lucrative modeling career and opened a flower shop at South Beach, Miami.

ENDING #2

Pari Hart receives the tragic news. She rushes to the washroom and takes some painkillers.

Waiting to go on, the coordinator tells her that it’s show time but she freezes. After 10 seconds of soul-searching, she wipes two drops of tears and executes the best show of her life. Pari becomes famous and struggles with more drugs, rehabs, loneliness and three divorces and a son and daughter. At age of 50 she dies in a beach house from an overdose of painkillers. The camera close in on a note she left behind –

“To my only friend, Lisa May, thank you.

Forever,
Pari Hart, model…"


Which ending does the world want to see?

Or do you have an ending that will send shockwaves in the theatres around the world and re-invent the wheel of screenwriting?

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Old 11-08-2008, 03:34 PM   #2
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This chick's arc'ing all over the place in both cases. How'bout if the assistant finds out about her friend, decides to withold the info because our girl has always been so fragile, and she goes on to become a super model who fires her assistant when she discovers the truth.
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Old 11-08-2008, 03:41 PM   #3
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Default Re: We don't need no Character Arc. Teachers, leave those screenwriters alone!

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Or do you have an ending that will send shockwaves in the theatres around the world and re-invent the wheel of screenwriting?
at the end it is revealed that the entire story, the entire" world"of everyone we have seen has been happening on a fleck of dust floating in an old house... then along comes a massive vaccuum and sucks it up.

The End
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Old 11-08-2008, 03:52 PM   #4
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Allniter,

Good idea, but sounds just a tad too TV. But good TV in this case.
I wish Hollywood one day would make movie about models -- on a romantic level with a Sid and Nancy template.

MovieQuill,

Are you sure you are not the "cousin" of Being John Malkovich.
Good but too good.


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Old 11-08-2008, 06:58 PM   #5
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Default Re: We don't need no Character Arc. Teachers, leave those screenwriters alone!

I prefer the second one of course. The first one is too much like a story for small children in regards to depth and interest and keeping everything positive.

One thing I don't like about Hollywood movies is how they always have to end on a good note. Vacancy for example, in the original screenplay, the guy dies and the woman drives away alone the sole survivor. IMHO that was a much better ending than him surviving and them driving off into the sunset or whatever.

I like foreign films where they are not so concerned about the "feel good or happy" ending.

If I sound confusing... well it's football night and I've had a few cold ones. Sorry...
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Old 11-08-2008, 09:04 PM   #6
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Default Re: We don't need no Character Arc. Teachers, leave those screenwriters alone!

At the end we discover that it wasn't bullemia after all. She was actually communicating with a race of multi-dimensional beings who are looking to add another dimension to their house. The renovations are on.
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Old 11-08-2008, 10:00 PM   #7
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Essentially a character arc is the change or transformation that a character experiences during his quest that inevitably affects the course and final outcome of the story. Remember that all stories, regardless of what they're about are only about one thing at their core...the restoration of a balance. If your characters life goes out of control or they lose perspective in some way than their quest is the restoration of that control or perspective again. Good luck.
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Old 11-09-2008, 01:36 AM   #8
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Old 11-09-2008, 01:52 AM   #9
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Default Re: We don't need no Character Arc. Teachers, leave those screenwriters alone!

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very few screenwriting "teachers" (none that I know of) actually teach arcs in actuality.

not to get into a whole debate here, but some characters don't arc. The old Bond for example, a lot of thriller characters don't or it's in simple terms what's known as a "redemptive" arc. Arc just means emotional journey and change.



This is not a story. This is the same beat repeated for how many ever pages until she dies.

Several iconic and classic films have "bad" endings which aren't neccessarily "negative" arcs. If you're going to tell a tragic story (and if Aristotle is to believed) then your character/protagonist has to fall from a great height - in other words, your model would have to be super successful and at the top of her game and spiral downward into depression or what have you. That would in fact be a negative arc. What you described above is no arc and no changing and is rather boring. In fact, a top model spiraling downward is also boring imho.
I concur. A character arc is about change. Not whether the ending is happy or sad. Neither of the examples sound like any type of story worth writing, reading, or watching. Your begging the question.
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Old 11-09-2008, 03:06 AM   #10
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