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Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Santa Monica
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I don't describe facial expressions.
If I write the scene well, the reader will see those faces anyway. Overwriting takes energy out of the flow. I'd only mention a facial expression, if: 1. It's typical for a character (like a twitch, or a habit) 2. If it's a reaction that is not in sync of what one would expect (deputy sees widow to inform her she's a widow, and she smiles.). |
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