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Old 04-04-2009, 08:03 PM   #21
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Default Re: Describing Facial Expressions

I don't describe facial expressions.

If I write the scene well, the reader will see those faces anyway.

Overwriting takes energy out of the flow.

I'd only mention a facial expression, if:
1. It's typical for a character (like a twitch, or a habit)
2. If it's a reaction that is not in sync of what one would expect (deputy sees widow to inform her she's a widow, and she smiles.).
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