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If we're all dead the use of "we see" won't make any sense.
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INT. INTERNET - DAY
We see bodies - our own. How did this happen? We are bloody and beaten and dead. We see JEFF LOWELL, once a warm and fuzzy bunny of a man, now a crazed tiger released from his cage, all gnashing teeth and red eyes. We see his hands, covered in blood, and his butcher knife, dripping unknown bodily fluids on our twitching corpses. JEFF I told you guys, it doesn't f*cking matter! FADE OUT
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Engaging in a "we see" debate is liker suicide by cop, only with screenwriters.
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However... If I saw read this on a "we see" thread on a screenwriting forum, I'd be like, "Nah, you don't need the 'we see'." |
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You can only use "we smell" in novels and John Waters movies.
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Deliberately undramatic?!
Well I never! In-deed! and Hmmpf! I was just trying to toss out an example...How about: INNER SPACE WE SEE, HEAR, SMELL, TASTE, TOUCH, and INTUIT-- A vast and endless sea of Done Dealers-- SUDDENLY - A GINORMOUS MOTHERFVCKING ASTEROID comes SCREAMING out of the cosmos heading straight at US until it fills the entire computer screen-- No matter how much WE TILT, PAN, DOLLY, PULL BACK, FISH EYE, or hit the ESCAPE key-- The ASTEROID SMASHES through our computer screens and PULVERIZES US into OBLIVION - BUT-- In the split NANOSECOND before OBLITERATION-- WE SEE that the asteroid is actually JEFF LOWELL! The microscopic brain matter of a bazillion Done Dealers EXPLODES into OUTER SPACE, then-- PLUMMETS back down to Earth somewhere near Christmas Island
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I get that an action statement can start with "we see". But when the next statement doesn't start with "we see" I'm confused about whether or not we're supposed to see it.
To help with any confusion I usually do something like: We see Bob walk and sit at the table. We don't see the bomb under the table. If I were to have something without a "we ..." like: The utensils are arranged in Morse Code. ... I let the reader decide if they want to see it or not.
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