Polishing a pilot for an 8 ep in the "True Detective" meets "The Sinner" storytelling medium and one of my mechanisms for closing each episode, with a cliffhanger, involves having different POVs broken up by credits.
Obviously, not the actual credits, just where they go in each ep's closing.
I understand this is unusual, but I'm going to roll with it regardless, unless one of you fine folks offers some strong advice against such.
It reads and works well. Very well. If a reader gets to this point, page 54ish for each ep, then they've read it all the way through. Would "directing" on the final 2 pages really be a major turnoff?
Thanks in advance for any and all help!
Obviously, not the actual credits, just where they go in each ep's closing.
I understand this is unusual, but I'm going to roll with it regardless, unless one of you fine folks offers some strong advice against such.
It reads and works well. Very well. If a reader gets to this point, page 54ish for each ep, then they've read it all the way through. Would "directing" on the final 2 pages really be a major turnoff?
Thanks in advance for any and all help!
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