i have a scene where a killer/mystery person is following who he thinks is the female protag of the story but it is really another female. what should i write for this person as a name if i dont want the reader to know its not the female protag???
The killer watches what looks to be JANET get inside her car.
see, if i write it like that the reader already gets a sense that it may or may not be Janet.
please advise? or am i not explaining this clear?
The killer watches what looks to be JANET get inside her car.
see, if i write it like that the reader already gets a sense that it may or may not be Janet.
please advise? or am i not explaining this clear?
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