Folks,
I'm writing three scenes that feed into each other:
the end of the first scene, a person glances at the tv, sees a press conference on the news. Then we are at the press conference. Then we are watching it on tv again, someone else's house.
Of course, I'm trying to avoid "directing instead of writing" by not writing "tight on", "pull back", etc.
Would appreciate your suggestions.
Thanks
I'm writing three scenes that feed into each other:
the end of the first scene, a person glances at the tv, sees a press conference on the news. Then we are at the press conference. Then we are watching it on tv again, someone else's house.
Of course, I'm trying to avoid "directing instead of writing" by not writing "tight on", "pull back", etc.
Would appreciate your suggestions.
Thanks
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