I think an exec's first question would be "Why?". If you can answer that in a way that catches his attention, great. But it sounds as if you're trying to yoke a romantic movie to a thriller. Check out Hitchock's "Notorious", "North by Northwest" and "Rear Window" to see how it's done.
The girl's been feeling kinda "blocked up" since her recent visit to her gynocologist. The guy's a retired bomb disposal expert with no thumbs. Once he gets into her knickers he realizes their deadly plight. He can see the device's LCD, counting down the minutes and seconds. It's motion-sensitive, if the bus stops moving...
But wait, maybe he can do something to simulate the movement...
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