Does a character following another one easy to write? I have this character sitting in his car while its raining - he watches the others come out of an establishment and then follows them. Is there an easy scene somewhere that describes it best? Or should I post what I have to see if it works?
And also, I want to know if this line of dialgoue sounds like subtext? Character one saids:
You know John, I’m so happy you’re beginning to remember your parents--
{The answer from John/Jarvis}
"Well being around you does help, it’s like getting to know them for the first time."
The reason I asked is because the first character is a female - who so happens to be his real mother - but she doesn't know that he's her son. So, does this fall in the line of SUB-TEXT? Just curisous?
And also, I want to know if this line of dialgoue sounds like subtext? Character one saids:
You know John, I’m so happy you’re beginning to remember your parents--
{The answer from John/Jarvis}
"Well being around you does help, it’s like getting to know them for the first time."
The reason I asked is because the first character is a female - who so happens to be his real mother - but she doesn't know that he's her son. So, does this fall in the line of SUB-TEXT? Just curisous?
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