I have 2 characters who initially appear as Cop 1 and Cop 2 because they are in disguise and I don't want the reader to know who they are just yet. When I get to the scene where they reveal themselves and become "Bob" and "Ted" do I just switch from Cop 1 and Cop 2 and start using their names?
Cop 1
Come on, it's only me.
Come on, it's only me.
BOB O'CONNOR pulls off his sunglasses and hat to reveal
a handsome, young man.
a handsome, young man.
Bob
Had you fooled, didn't I?
Had you fooled, didn't I?
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